One week from today, I’ll be doing a third quarterly virtual book recommendation event with the Ashland Public Library in Massachusetts. I’ll be sharing some fantasy and science fiction book recommendations on Zoom on from 6:30 to 7:00 PM EDT on Thursday, November 20, and if you want to join us next week, you can register here.

November Virtual Sci-Fi/Fantasy Book Recs with Kristen of Fantasy Cafe Graphic

It’s not necessary to catch up on previous events since these are standalone sessions, but if you missed the August event and want to watch it, you can find it on Youtube here. This included discussion of the following books:

  • Lips Touch: Three Times by Laini Taylor; illustrated by Jim di Bartolo
  • The Reformatory by Tananarive Due
  • The Girl Who Fell Beneath the Sea by Axie Oh
  • Blood Over Bright Haven by M. L. Wang
  • The Ten Thousand Doors of January by Alix E. Harrow
  • Death of the Author by Nnedi Okorafor
  • Beggars in Spain by Nancy Kress

If you missed the first one, you can watch it on Youtube here. The books highlighted in May were as follows:

The Witch Roads
by Kate Elliott
448pp (Hardcover)
My Rating: 7/10
LibraryThing Rating: 4.22/5
Goodreads Rating: 4.12/5
 

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Book Description:

Book 1 in the Witch Roads duology, the latest epic novel by fan favorite Kate Elliott..

Status is hereditary, class is bestowed, trust must be earned.

When an arrogant prince (and his equally arrogant entourage) gets stuck in Orledder Halt as part of brutal political intrigue, competent and sunny deputy courier Elen—once a child slave meant to shield noblemen from the poisonous Pall—is assigned to guide him through the hills to reach his destination.

When she warns him not to enter the haunted Spires, the prince doesn’t heed her advice, and the man who emerges from the towers isn’t the same man who entered.

The journey that follows is fraught with danger. Can a group taught to ignore and despise the lower classes survive with a mere deputy courier as their guide?

The Witch Roads is the first book in an epic fantasy duology by Kate Elliott that concludes with The Nameless Land, which was just released on November 4. I wanted to read this in part because I loved Elliott’s Spiritwalker trilogy (Cold Magic, Cold Fire, Cold Steel), and I was also curious about it because she started working on these books just for fun—which led her to rediscover her love of writing after she’d been wondering if she should stop doing it. (You can read more about this in her guest post “If This Can’t Make Me Cry Anymore: Thoughts on Writing and Quitting” from Women in SF&F Month this past April.)

My general thoughts on The Witch Roads are similar to those I had on the last one of Elliott’s books I’d read before this one, her novella Servant Mage: it’s a solid book that’s doing something interesting with its focus and protagonist, but it just doesn’t have the sort of vivid voice and characters that made her Spiritwalker trilogy memorable to me. Although I did love the world of The Witch Roads and the story’s setup, I found that the pacing dragged once the journey mentioned in the description began. Perhaps it works better if both books are read back to back since this is only the first half of a bigger story, but I didn’t think this showed enough character growth to make the pages dedicated to wandering worthwhile—nor were there enough engaging interactions throughout these long sections to hold my interest, especially since what was shown about the characters started to seem repetitive instead of providing new insights into them. It included a budding romance that occurred rather quickly, and it kept bringing up the same rifts, grudges, and arguments through the course of their travels.

There were parts of The Witch Roads I really enjoyed, especially before the beginning of the journey, like its choice of protagonist: Elen, a woman in her thirties who has some life experience. She helped raise her teenage nephew, and though she is a main character with a secret past that catches up to her, she’s also a common person who has been working a fairly ordinary job for some time. (At least, deputy courier would be a fairly ordinary job if not for the potential dangers of fungal spores and the horrors that await those who come into contact with them, but being aware of such things is just part of traveling the paths she does and isn’t out-of-the-ordinary for the world she lives in.)

I felt that the worldbuilding was this novel’s greatest strength, and I loved the brief excerpts from texts that filled in more about the history of the world and empire. It felt like Elliott had carefully considered what she was putting onto the page, and I appreciate that her cultures don’t seem like caricatures or monoliths. When she portrays life within the empire, she shows the distinct split between life as a royal or noble and life as an ordinary citizen: the differences between their experiences and concerns and the ridiculousness of royal protocol to someone like Elen.

For the most part, The Witch Roads felt like reading a decent book by an experienced author who knew what she was doing, but in addition to having some pacing issues, it was missing that special, difficult-to-define spark that makes a book resonate with me as a reader. I’m on the fence about whether or not to read the next book since this had some great worldbuilding accompanied by an occasional nice bit of humor or turn of phrase, and it’s possible the second half of the duology will delve more into the political aspects and parts of the world I’d find more compelling—but given the vast number of unread books out there, I’m unlikely to make finishing this duology a priority.

My Rating: 7/10

Where I got my reading copy: Finished copy from the publisher.

Read an Excerpt from The Witch Roads

I’m delighted to have a guest post by Theodora Goss to share with you today—and to be giving away a copy of her short story collection coming out next week! Her previous work includes the Mythopoeic Award–winning collection Snow White Learns Witchcraft and The Extraordinary Adventures of the Athena Club trilogy, which begins with the Locus Award–winning and Nebula Award–nominated novel The Strange Case of the Alchemist’s Daughter.

Her latest book, Letters from An Imaginary Country, is described as a “themed collection of imaginary places” that engages with storytelling and identity. Containing three new short stories and an introduction by Jo Walton, it comes out in trade paperback and ebook on November 11. More information on the book and how to win a copy is below—along with the essay “Writing as Witchcraft” by Theodora Goss!

Cover of Letters from an Imaginary Country by Theodora Goss

About LETTERS FROM AN IMAGINARY COUNTRY:

Roam through the captivating stories of World Fantasy, Locus, and Mythopoeic Award winner Theodora Goss (the Athena Club trilogy). This themed collection of imaginary places, with three new stories, recalls Susanna Clarke’s alternate Europe and the surreal metafictions of Jorge Luis Borges. Deeply influenced by the author’s Hungarian childhood during the regime of the Soviet Union, each of these stories engages with storytelling and identity, including her own.

The infamous girl monsters of nineteenth-century fiction gather in London and form their own club. In the imaginary country of Thüle, characters from folklore band together to fight a dictator. An intrepid girl reporter finds the hidden land of Oz—and joins its invasion of our world. The author writes the autobiography of her alternative life and a science fiction love letter to Budapest. The White Witch conquers England with snow and silence.

Table of Contents
Introduction by Jo Walton
“The Mad Scientist’s Daughter”
“Dora/Dóra: An Autobiography” (original to this collection)
“Cimmeria: From the Journal of Imaginary Anthropology
“England Under the White Witch”
“Frankenstein’s Daughter”
“Come See the Living Dryad”
“Beautiful Boys”
“Pug”
“A Letter to Merlin”
“Estella Saves the Village”
“Pellargonia: A Letter to the Journal of Imaginary Anthropology
“Lost Girls of Oz”
“To Budapest, With Love”
“Child-Empress of Mars”
“Letters From an Imaginary Country” (original to this collection)
“The Secret Diary of Mina Harker” (original to this collection)

Writing as Witchcraft

Remember the three witches in Shakespeare’s Macbeth? When Macbeth first meets them on the heath, they greet him with prophesies, telling him that he will be king of Scotland, although he will not bear a kingly lineage. Later in the play, he comes across them again, casting a spell around a cauldron. You probably remember its haunting refrain:

Double, double, toil and trouble;
Fire, burn; and cauldron, bubble.

Their initial prophesy is also a kind of spell: they foretell Macbeth’s future, and he makes it come to pass. He could, at various points in the play, make different choices. But enchanted by his own destiny, he kills the king of Scotland, assumes the throne, and dooms himself.

Is it too far-fetched of me to propose that the witches in the play function as writers? Shakespeare’s most famous writer-figure is also a magic-maker, Prospero of The Tempest. He is a typical representation of the masterful magician: an older man, usually presented as bearded and venerable. At the beginning of the play, he has already defeated the witch Sycorax and imprisoned her son Caliban. The spirit Ariel is his captive servant. This is a vision of the writer as owner and captor, as well as usurper of a magic that did not originally belong to him.

The three witches give us an alternative vision of the writer. They are old women, a collaborative sisterhood, creating both magic and reality through their words. When Macbeth comes across them for the second time, they are stirring their cauldron, putting into it a litany of gruesome but poetic ingredients:

Eye of newt, and toe of frog,
Wool of bat, and tongue of dog,
Adder’s fork, and blind-worm’s sting,
Lizard’s leg, and howlet’s wing . . .

This scene reminds me of J.R.R. Tolkien’s idea of the “cauldron of story,” which he describes in his essay “On Fairy-stories.” According to Tolkien, that cauldron contains all the stories human beings have ever told: myths, legends, folk and fairy tales, even history. Those narratives make a rich soup (like an Irish stew, with carrots, potatoes, cubes of beef, garlic and onions to give it flavor). Imagine a writer dipping her ladle into the cauldron of story and drawing out the ingredients she needs—maybe the history of Tudor England, maybe a fairy tale, floating together in the broth. According to Tolkien, this is how stories get made. Stories are put into the cauldron, where they bubble (toil and trouble). Narrative elements are drawn out to make new stories. Those stories then go back into the cauldron as new ingredients for future story-making.

What I want to argue, through examining these metaphors, is that writing is essentially witchcraft. It does not seem a coincidence that the word “spell” means both an enchantment and how to write a word—if you can spell the right words in the right way, you can cast an enchantment over your reader. Take, for example, the sentence “Once upon a time in the middle of winter, when snowflakes were falling from the sky, a queen sat sewing at her window, which had a frame of ebony wood.” You probably recognize this description as the beginning of “Snow White.” Reading this, a reader will see the white snowflakes, the dark wood of the window frame. He will wonder, who is the queen? Why is she sewing? What is about to happen?

(In this essay, I chose “she” for the writer and “he” for the reader, but that gendering is arbitrary. Of course, both men and women can be writers and readers, witches and wizards, monarchs of Scotland.)

In her Wizard of Earthsea trilogy, Ursula K. Le Guin emphasizes the magical power of words: a wizard’s power is based on knowing the true name of a thing. If he can know its true name, he can control it, transform it. In those books, Le Guin’s wizards are more like Prospero than Shakespeare’s weird sisters—female witches are seen as dangerous, their power illegitimate. However, Le Guin later reevaluated her approach to gender. Her later Earthsea novels show us the danger of a magic that tries to control, and present more collaborative ideas of power. Even in the earlier novels, the best wizards, like her protagonist Ged, learn to maintain the balance of the world—Ged almost dies when he tries to wield his powers out of anger and arrogance.

Tolkien talked about the writer as a subcreator—the creator of a secondary world that has the texture of reality, so that as the reader traverses that world, he experiences it as real, even though part of his mind knows he is sitting in an armchair, drinking a cup of Earl Gray tea. How does the writer become a subcreator? I think it’s a kind of witchcraft. The writer dips her ladle into the cauldron of story and brings out an idea, a character, a plot, a setting—any of the things that bubble in the soup. Then she struggles to put the right words in the right order so she can write, “The princess was all alone in the forest. She looked at the trees around her and did not know what to do. Frightened, she began to run.” The reader will run through the forest with Snow White. To the extent the writer describes that forest—foxes rustling in the undergrowth, branches whipping against the princess as she stumbles through them, a veiled moon floating mysteriously overhead—the reader will see and feel and hear all of it.

So learning to be a writer means learning to cast spells. It means practicing witchcraft, with an emphasis on practicing. The difference between a witch or wizard, and other magical creatures such as fairies, goblins, djinn, and their ilk, is that witchcraft and wizardry are learned. Fairies create enchantment because they are themselves magical—for them, it’s like breathing. But witches and wizards are human beings who must learn how to wield magic.

How to become a writer-witch, or witchy writer, could be the subject of another, longer article. But think about what witches do: They keep a grimoire (or writing journal). They join a coven (or writing group). They may even go to school to learn their craft. (Ged is initially taught by a witch, then apprenticed to a wizard, then sent to a famous wizarding school—he gets his MFA in wizardry). I have participated in writing groups and workshops, as well as taught in an MFA program. There is no way of learning that is better than any other. The wizard’s way tends to be more formal, institutional. The witch’s way is perhaps more natural—it requires not only reading and writing spells (poems, short stories, novels), but also paying close attention to the world around us. A witch should know the names of the plants in her garden, as well as in the surrounding meadows and forests. She should know myths, legends, folk and fairy tales, and be able to tell them again in different forms. She should be able to see into the hearts of human beings, and also a little into the future. Her understanding should run deep, like a river, and soar high, like a hawk. Out of all these things, she should create worlds we can imaginatively inhabit—she should subcreate, or in other words, make magic.

You too can make magic. Dip your ladle into the cauldron. What does it lift to the surface? Eye of newt? Toe of frog? Those will do to start with. Now turn them into a story—go  practice witchcraft.

Photo of Theodora Goss
Photo Credit:
Matthew Stein Photography
Theodora Goss is the World Fantasy, Locus, and Mythopoeic Award-winning author of the Athena Club trilogy of novels, including The Strange Case of the Alchemist’s Daughter, European Travel for the Monstrous Gentlewoman, and The Sinister Mystery of the Mesmerizing Girl. Her other publications include short story and poetry collections In the Forest of Forgetting, Songs for OpheliaSnow White Learns Witchcraft, and The Collected Enchantments, as well as novella The Thorn and the Blossom. She has been a finalist for the Nebula, Crawford, and Shirley Jackson Awards, as well as on the Tiptree Award Honor List. Her work has been translated into fifteen languages. She is currently a Master Lecturer in Rhetoric at Boston University. Visit her at theodoragoss.com.

Book Giveaway

Courtesy of Tachyon Publications, I have one finished copy of Letters from an Imaginary Country to give away!

Giveaway Rules: To be entered in the giveaway, fill out Fantasy Cafe’s Letters from an Imaginary Country Giveaway Google form, linked below. One entry per household and the winners will be randomly selected. Those from the US are eligible to win. The giveaway will be open until the end of the day on Friday, November 14. The winner has 24 hours to respond once contacted via email, and if I don’t hear from them after 24 hours has passed, a new winner will be chosen (who will also have 24 hours to respond until someone gets back to me with a place to send the book).

Please note email addresses will only be used for the purpose of contacting the winner. Once the giveaway is over all the emails will be deleted.

Note: The giveaway link has been removed since it is now over.

As you may be aware, Patricia A. McKillip is one of my favorite authors, and as much as I love her novels, like The Changeling Sea and The Forgotten Beasts of Eld, her short fiction holds a special place in my heart since I first discovered her writing through her enchanting collection Wonders of the Invisible World.

So I’m thrilled to be giving away a finished copy of The Essential Patricia A. McKillip, which includes an introduction by Swordspoint author Ellen Kushner, 2 nonfiction pieces, and 16 short stories (including “The Gorgon in the Cupboard,” one of my personal favorites). This will be released in hardcover and digital formats on October 28. (Giveaway open to US residents only.)

Cover of The Essential Patricia A. McKillip

Cover Designer: Elizabeth Story
Cover Artist: Thomas Canty

About THE ESSENTIAL PATRICIA A. MCKILLIP:

World Fantasy Award winner Patricia A. McKillip (The Forgotten Beasts of Eld) has inspired generations of readers with her enchanting, and subversive fiction. This lovely hardcover career-retrospective edition offers McKillip’s finest short stories. Featuring an original introduction by Ellen Kushner (Swordspoint) and cover art from frequent McKillip illustrator Thomas Canty, The Essential Patricia A. McKillip is a must-have for fans of classic fantasy.

Patricia A. McKillip has been widely hailed as one of fantasy’s most significant authors. She was lauded as “rich and regal” (the New York Times), “enchanting” (the Washington Post), and “luminous” (Library Journal).

Within McKillip’s magical landscapes, a mermaid statue comes to life; princesses dance with dead suitors; a painting and a muse possess a youthful artist; seductive sea travelers enrapture distant lovers, a time-traveling angel endures religious madness; and an overachieving teenage mage discovers her own true name.

Contents

Introduction by Ellen Kushner

Stories
“Lady of the Skulls”
“Wonders of the Invisible World”
“The Lion and the Lark”
“The Harrowing of the Dragon of Hoarsbreath”
“Out of the Woods”
“The Fortune Teller”
“The Witches of Junket”
“Byndley”
“Jack O’Lantern”
“The Stranger”
“The Gorgon in the Cupboard”
“Mer”
“Weird”
“Hunter’s Moon”
“Undine”
“Knight of the Well”

Nonfiction
“What Inspires Me”: Guest of Honor Speech at WisCon
“Writing High Fantasy”

Patricia Anne McKillip was born February 29, 1948, in Salem, Oregon. She attended the College of Notre Dame, Belmont, and San Jose State University in California, receiving a B. A. in 1971 and an M. A. in 1972 in English.

Her first publications were short children’s books; The Throme of the Erril of Sherill and The House on Parchment Street (both 1973). Her first novel for adults, The Forgotten Beasts of Eld (1974), won a World Fantasy Award.

McKillip’s science fiction and fantasy novels include the Riddle-Master trilogy: The Riddle-Master of Hed (1976), Heir of Sea and Fire (1977), and Locus Award winner and Hugo and World Fantasy Award finalist Harpist in the Wind (1979); Nebula Award finalist Winter Rose (1996); Nebula Award nominee The Tower at Stony Wood (2000); World Fantasy Award finalist Od Magic (2005); Mythopoeic Award winner Solstice Wood (2006); and Mythopoeic Award winner Kingfisher (2016).

McKillip’s other books include non-SF children’s book The Night Gift (1976); adult contemporary novel Stepping from the Shadows (1982); and shared-world novel Brian Froud’s Faerielands: Something Rich and Strange (1994), a Mythopoeic Award winner. Her collections include Harrowing the Dragon (2005); Wonders of the Invisible World (2012); and Endeavour Award winner Dreams of Distant Shores (2016). McKillip received a World Fantasy life achievement award in 2008.

Patricia McKillip was living in Oregon when she passed away in May of 2022.


Book Giveaway

Courtesy of Tachyon Publications, I have one finished copy of The Essential Patricia A. McKillip to give away!

Giveaway Rules: To be entered in the giveaway, fill out Fantasy Cafe’s Essential Patricia A. McKillip Giveaway Google form, linked below. One entry per household and the winners will be randomly selected. Those from the US are eligible to win. The giveaway will be open until the end of the day on Friday, October 31. The winner has 24 hours to respond once contacted via email, and if I don’t hear from them after 24 hours has passed, a new winner will be chosen (who will also have 24 hours to respond until someone gets back to me with a place to send the book).

Please note email addresses will only be used for the purpose of contacting the winner. Once the giveaway is over all the emails will be deleted.

Note: The giveaway link has been removed since it is now over.

The Leaning Pile of Books is a feature in which I highlight books I got over the last week that sound interesting—old or new, bought or received in the mail for review consideration. Since I hope you will find new books you’re interested in reading in these posts, I try to be as informative as possible. If I can find them, links to excerpts, author’s websites, and places where you can find more information on the book are included, along with series information and the publisher’s book description.

Disclosure: I am an affiliate of Bookshop.org, and I will earn a commission if you click through and make a purchase.

Technically, this should have gone up last weekend, but life got in the way! In case you missed any of the new posts since the last one of these, they were:

  • Guest Post by House of Dusk Author Deva Fagan — Deva Fagan shared about some of the books and resources on ancient history that she found inspirational when working on her epic fantasy novel in “Real History for Fantasy Worlds.”
  • Review of The Dream Hotel by Laila Lalami — This literary science fiction novel set in the near future had a strong start, but I didn’t think it engaged enough with the various aspects it introduced and it ended up feeling underbaked to me.

This is basically The Leaning Pile of Books: Kushiel’s Legacy Edition since I’ve been reading the first trilogy in its entirety this year after Cassiel’s Servant made me want to revisit Kushiel’s Dart and finish the original trilogy. (I actually had already read all three books in the third Kushiel’s Legacy trilogy set a few generations after the first six books: Naamah’s Kiss, Naamah’s Curse, and Naamah’s Blessing. I’d now like to revisit those as well.)

I’m now very close to done with the first trilogy, and I love this series so much. These are now among my favorite books ever, and Phèdre and Joscelin are now some of my favorite characters ever. Of course I had to get the trilogy I was missing, and then I came across a not-too-expensive hardcover copy of the book I only had in ARC form and had to get that, too. (Not covered below: the new copy of Kushiel’s Avatar that I bought because my copy had a torn page and was missing a bunch of text. Fortunately, I was able to read the missing parts elsewhere, but I wanted to have a copy that, you know, contains all the words.)

Cover of Kushiel's Scion by Jacqueline Carey

Kushiel’s Scion (Kushiel’s Legacy: Imriel’s Trilogy #1) by Jacqueline Carey

I’m showing the cover of the first book in this trilogy and its description here since that’s the place to start with the middle trilogy, but I got Kushiel’s Justice (book 2) and Kushiel’s Mercy (book 3) at the same time.

I remember always seeing these on the bookshelves at Borders, but sadly, they now seem to be harder to find than they once were. That’s actually why I bought them now instead of just adding them to my wish list for later. I kind of regret not looking around for hardcover editions, but I saw these on Bookshop and decided to snatch them up because I needed to have all 10 related books!

It will be interesting to see how the story continues with the next generation of characters. I was intrigued to see Jacqueline Carey’s thoughts on this “orphaned” series of hers and how now would be a good time for it given the rise of romantasy:

I don’t actually consider myself a “romantasy” writer—to me, Kushiel’s Legacy has always been alternate historical fantasy—but it’s mostly just a marketing term. Each trilogy has a strong romantic throughline, and nowhere more than in Imriel’s story. Hell, forbidden love doesn’t get much more forbidden. She’s the heir to the kingdom, he’s the son of its greatest traitor. Their love could quite literally divide the realm. But it’s also about a journey of healing and self-reclamation, intrigue, friendship, desire, shame, coming of age, politics, war, justice, forgiveness… all the things.

I adore how she wrote the relationship between Phèdre and Joscelin, so I’m excited to see how this one unfolds.

 

Imriel de la Courcel’s birth parents are history’s most reviled traitors, but his adoptive parents, the Comtesse Phedre and the warrior-priest Joscelin, are Terre d’Ange’s greatest champions.

Stolen, tortured and enslaved as a young boy, Imriel is now a Prince of the Blood; third in line for the throne in a land that revels in art, beauty and desire. It is a court steeped in deeply laid conspiracies—and there are many who would see the young prince dead. Some despise him out of hatred for his mother, Melisande, who nearly destroyed the entire realm in her quest for power. Others because they fear he has inherited his mother’s irresistible allure—and her dangerous gifts.

As he comes of age, plagued by unwanted desires, Imriel shares their fears. When a simple act of friendship traps Imriel in a besieged city where the infamous Melisande is worshiped as a goddess and where a dead man leads an army, the Prince must face his greatest test: to find his true self.

Cover of Cassiel's Servant by Jacqueline Carey

Cassiel’s Servant (Kushiel’s Legacy) by Jacqueline Carey

Cassiel’s Servant was my 2023 Book of the Year, and I have already read and reviewed this companion to Kushiel’s Dart from the perspective of Joscelin. But I’d like to have as many of the Kushiel’s Legacy books in hardcover as possible, so I ended up buying a more durable copy.

I have a confession to make: I actually love this book more than its counterpart, Kushiel’s Dart. (Not a lot more, just a little!) It had been years since I read the previously published novel when I read the latest one, so I wasn’t sure if I’d still feel that way after a reread. After rereading the first, I realized I did prefer this one (again, a little!) and had a better understanding of why that is: Cassiel’s Servant is more deeply introspective and character-driven than Kushiel’s Dart.

It’s the perfect example of how to write the same story from another viewpoint since it is so different from the first. Though it has a lot of the same plot points, it glosses over a lot of the politics and conspiracies since that’s not relevant to Joscelin. Instead, it focuses on the parts that matter to him, and it shows how he grapples with what it means to him to truly follow Cassiel and his example. I love his internal journey, and I’m certain this is a book that I’ll reread at some point.

 

The lush epic fantasy that inspired a generation with a single precept: “Love As Thou Wilt.”

Returning to the realm of Terre d’Ange which captured an entire generation of fantasy readers, New York Times bestselling author Jacqueline Carey brings us a hero’s journey for a new era.

In Kushiel’s Dart, a daring young courtesan uncovered a plot to destroy her beloved homeland. But hers is only half the tale. Now see the other half of the heart that lived it.

Cassiel’s Servant is a retelling of cult favorite Kushiel’s Dart from the point of view of Joscelin, Cassiline warrior-priest and protector of Phèdre nó Delaunay. He’s sworn to celibacy and the blade as surely as she’s pledged to pleasure, but the gods they serve have bound them together. When both are betrayed, they must rely on each other to survive.

From his earliest training to captivity amongst their enemies, his journey with Phèdre to avert the conquest of Terre D’Ange shatters body and mind… and brings him an impossible love that he will do anything to keep.

Even if it means breaking all vows and losing his soul.

The Dream Hotel
by Laila Lalami
336pp (Hardcover)
My Rating: 6/10
LibraryThing Rating: 3.8/5
Goodreads Rating: 3.61/5
 

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The Dream Hotel by Laila Lalami is a standalone literary science fiction novel set in a version of the not-too-distant future where the Risk Assessment Administration monitors data to evaluate the likelihood that an individual will commit a crime. It’s a chillingly plausible story that will likely make you wish to go off the grid completely, and I thought it was excellent at creating a future that seems possible based on our history and present. However, my initial high opinion of it faded somewhat by the time I reached the end. Some parts of it were too drawn out, and it didn’t delve quite as deeply into exploring its ideas as I’d anticipated, especially given its earlier setup and a new perspective introduced later in the story that I thought would have greater significance.

In this version of the future, the Risk Assessment Administration was created after someone shot a bunch of people on live television during a Super Bowl half-time show, killing more than 100 attendees total. After the fact, it was clear that there was a lot of data indicating that this man would do something like this—including documentation of abusive behavior, recent ammo purchases on his credit card, and internet searches related to bypassing security—and these deaths could have been prevented if all these factors had been taken into consideration earlier. In response, a system that measured each person’s potential to commit a crime was developed: one that tracked each individual’s data and updated their risk assessment score accordingly. Though some wondered if this was too intrusive, studies showed that suicide rates and gun deaths decreased dramatically after this system’s implementation, and many people found the score to be a number that they barely had to think about since it did not have a huge impact on their lives and only came up when applying for a mortgage or such.

This had been the case for Sara, the main character, until the day she was stopped at the airport on her way back from an annual work-related conference. When she finally learned she was being held because her risk assessment score had risen slightly above what was considered “safe,” she had difficulty thinking of anything she could have done to raise her score to that level. But it turned out she didn’t technically do anything to raise her numbers: the implant she started using as a sleep aid after the birth of her twins had been recording her dreams, and her risk assessment score increased because she had dreamed of harming her husband.

Like most of the women held in the same facility because of their potential to commit a crime, Sara has been kept there for far longer than the 3 weeks she was told to expect, and she’s been in detention for about 10 months at the beginning of the novel. She’s been told repeatedly that there will be no hindrances to her release as long as she keeps her head down and follows the rules, but she has not even been able to schedule her first hearing and has been growing increasingly frustrated as her sentence continues to drag on with no end in sight. This is the story of the obstacles she faces while in detainment, her attempts to make sense of the dreams that landed her there, and her struggle to regain her freedom and reunite with her family.

As you may have inferred from my opening paragraph, I found The Dream Hotel to be a bit frustrating. It hooked me immediately with its vision of a near future that seemed all too close and eerily plausible, and earlier parts of the novel had some quotes that stood out and made me pause, such as:

“To be a woman was to watch yourself not just through your own eyes, but through the eyes of others.” (page 43)

During the first third or so, I was especially interested in seeing how it engaged with the variety of topics it touched on and seemed likely to explore: for example, those related to data tracking, technology, and freedom; the intersection between race/immigration and imprisonment (given that Sara details her experiences with flights as the daughter of Moroccan immigrants and is likely detained in part due to that); and how capitalism ties into the exploitation of detainees for profit.

Unfortunately, the novel did not delve into these subjects much more as it progressed, and I found my interest waning during the second half. It wasn’t a bad book, but it was one that had potential to be so much better than it was, and I was disappointed that it kept teasing compelling or thoughtful aspects only to hold back on further engagement with them. It outright annoyed me that there was one section in the middle following another perspective that seemed like it was going to be far more significant than it ended up being, especially given that it really felt like it was leading into a major subplot that never came to be.

This may have worked better for me if it delved further into the characters, or at least the main protagonist. Sara is a deeply sympathetic character with her terrible circumstances and grief at missing so many of her babies’ earliest milestones, and her overall emotional journey and realizations about handling her situation are rewarding. She’s not a poorly developed character by any means, but she wasn’t particularly dimensional, especially considering she’s the only character with a decent amount of development. She certainly didn’t have the amount of depth or sort of vivid narrative voice (told in third person) that made her everyday life at the detainment center—which included working, conversing, trying to set up hearings, visiting with her family on occasion, dreaming, and writing in her dream journal—remain compelling throughout later parts of the novel. (Maybe I just have exceptionally strange dreams, but I also felt like most of the sections detailing her dreams as they were happening did not feel truly dreamlike.) There’s one instance of a climate-change-induced wildfire that breaks up some of the mundanity while illustrating the horrible treatment of these people who are prisoners in all but name, but this section was only slightly more interesting than the novel had become at that point. The novel started to feel like it had overstayed its welcome a bit past the halfway point.

The Dream Hotel does have a satisfying, meaningful ending, though it’s not as strong as it would have been if the added section shown from a different perspective hadn’t made it seem like it had been leading up to a more momentous conclusion. Given that there was a dangling bigger event that was then mostly dropped, it seemed like more would happen or be addressed in its final pages.

Though I’d hoped The Dream Hotel would offer more to question and ponder, I did appreciate how it highlighted the inhumane treatment of imprisoned/detained people and the need for community and bonds with each other, as well as the deep empathy that runs through it. Between these strengths and its promising first few chapters, it had a lot of potential to become one of my frequently recommended books, but ultimately, it felt underbaked.

My Rating: 6/10

Where I got my reading copy: I purchased it.

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